It was quite a productive session with Gerald. He is a quick study, and very intelligent too.
We were able to reinforce knowledge of narrative essay writing, complex and compound-complex sentence composition, order of adjectives, and the mechanics of punctuation.
I suggest an introduction of a 'reward system' in order to get him to take up the habit of reading for leisure. This will immensely improve his language proficiency, generally – but especially with recourse to vocabulary development and comprehension skills.